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Bruised Loved pg15-16
by Chankara Troupe
I felt hurt like being punched in the face and tired inside.Running away from my fears.I chose this poem because it felt so realistic but hurtful the way they detailed the poem.This author is a good poet I would like to hear more of her poems.The same thing happened to me with a rock flying to my head fast and all almost hit me in the eye but only in the head.I had a huge cut on my face it hurt bad but no scar.What I would say to the character is why is he bullying you how? did it start?I think he would say I don't know he just started on me maybe because im different.
Good job making connections to the poem. I agree the first couple of sentences feel realistic. When someone you care deeply about turns on you it feels just like that. Who is Chankara? What happened for her to feel this way?
ReplyDeleteRyan.. This is just awesome! You did such a great job.. I like how you give an example on how you can relate to your poem. I would actually want to hear more about this poem. It sounds interesting. Great Job!
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That sounds like such a sad book... keep putting up good post so I know whats going on. a little spelling errors, but not too much! keep up the awesome job!
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Good Job. I kike how you connected with the poem.
ReplyDeleteI liked the detail in your story's description. Did the story about the rock really happen to you I couldn't tell. It was nice post, it had a few errors though. Other than that I liked it!
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sounded good and i liked how you conected to the poem
ReplyDeleteHey Ryan. My name is ryan. I like your post. I like the way that you type words. It is extremely interesting. Very well done. I am proud of you.
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Ryan, just checked out your Wix...nice job. I agree that our differences makes us special. Why is it then, we struggle to accept one another for who we are? Pointer for next time-consider a caption for your image so your audience knows who the person is.
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